Tuesday, June 18, 2013

WIPpet Wednesday: The Interrogation



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Happy Wednesday! Lots of good news this week. I'm 40,000-plus words into my JuNoWriMo and have experienced several writer's highs this go-around that I don't remember feeling with my other manuscripts. Also, I just found out that The Beloved Daughter is up for Book of the Month award from The Book Club Network! This would be an amazing honor for a little indie book like mine! Would you stop by bookfun.org and vote for The Beloved Daughter on the right-hand side? I never even knew it was being considered, so I'm quite flabbergasted!

My WIP continues on namelessly. Here are 19 sentences from "JuNoWriMo Draft 1." (Again with the PG-13 rating, this time for "situational intensity" and "implied violence.")

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           “What’s the name of the girl who visited you?” The interrogator was so close to Mr. Tong’s face that Mr. Tong could smell the vinegar on his breath.

“She didn’t tell me her name.” Mr. Tong was thankful that he was blind. The interrogator, no matter how hard he might try, would never be able to get a physical description from him.

            “I will make you talk, old man. Whether you still have a tongue afterwards depends on how much you’re willing to help me.” To make his point, the interrogator pinched one of Mr. Tong’s fingers. Mr. Tong swallowed as a sharp needle found its way to the soft spot between the fingernail and the flesh underneath. “What was her name?”

            Mr. Tong tried to steady his shaking, but the palsy just traveled down to his free hand. The interrogator laughed. “I’ll make you quiver before the night’s through, old man. Now tell me who came to visit you.”

            Mr. Tong waited for his head to steady. He lifted his chin. “Even if I knew her name, I wouldn’t tell you.”

            The interrogator chuckled. Mr. Tong heard the sound of metal clinking. “I was hoping you’d feel that way.”
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Many thanks to K. L Schwengel at myrandommuse.wordpress.com for hosting this linkup! And please don't forget to vote for the Beloved Daughter!

Monday, June 17, 2013

Literary Things: Interview with Kate Frost

     The talented Kate Frost is a fellow author and WIPpeter, whose debut women's lit novel, The Butterfly Storm, was published just last week! I've been excited about her debut novel ever since I started connecting with Kate through our WIPpet Wednesday blog hops. Kate and I have never met personally, but seem to be kindred spirits, at least in terms of our writing; Kate and I have both been working on time-travel/historical books for kids or teens, and we both published our debut adult novels this year! Today I'm happy to welcome Kate Frost to Lightly Salted for a little chat. SEE BELOW TO SEE HOW YOU CAN WIN AN AMAZON GIFT CARD!




Me: Congratulations on publishing The Butterfly Storm. Can you give us your elevator pitch so we know what it's about?
Kate: Thanks Alana. I always find it incredibly difficult to succinctly sum up what The Butterfly Storm is about, so if I was really asked this question in an elevator I'd probably get all hot and flummoxed and trip over my words, but what I would really want to say would go something like this:
Sophie Keech is a twenty-something woman about to embark on a new and exciting life in Greece with her boyfriend Alekos. Outwardly life for Sophie is perfect but inside she's struggling with questions that have haunted her ever since her mum, Leila, divulged the truth about Sophie's father. Add to that life in Greece being not all it's cracked up to be and Sophie's hopes and dreams begin to unravel. When an accident involving Leila forces Sophie back to the UK, she has to confront her past before she's able to move on with her future. The Butterfly Storm is a story about the complications of love and family; it follows Sophie's physical and emotional journey through an important turning point in her life.  
Me: Was there a precise moment you decided to write The Butterfly Storm, or did your idea for your first novel progress more gradually?
Kate: It was a gradual progression. I’d already started to write a couple of novels before The Butterfly Storm but I never finished them and had all but abandoned them by the time I applied to Bath Spa University to do a MA in Creative Writing. A big part of the MA was to write 40,000 words of a novel to publishable standard, so the summer before starting the MA was when I really began to think about the novel I wanted to write. The novels I’d worked on previously had been rather dark with sci-fi elements and I wanted to write something completely different and, because of the time restraints, I felt writing a book  that didn’t need a lot of research would be a good idea. I’d also been inspired by the time I’d spent in Greece visiting my now husband’s family so I knew I wanted Greece to feature. By the time I started the MA I had the beginnings of a cast of characters, a loose idea of plot, and a first chapter, which now happens to be chapter seven of the finished novel.
Me: Which of the characters in The Butterfly Storm share bits and pieces of your own personality?
Kate: Ha, now there’s a good question! I’m very different to my main character Sophie, who can be opinionated, passionate and headstrong but I do share her need to have her own space and I like having quiet moments to myself just as she does. I wish I had her spontaneity too. I would say I'm calm like Alekos and have his sense of family values, and I’m a good listener like Robert (Sophie’s mum’s friend).  
Me: How long did you work on The Butterfly Storm? Were there any stages in the writing process that were particularly tedious?
Kate: I started work on The Butterfly Storm in the summer of 2004 and finished the last edit of it in April this year. I should add that I’ve not constantly worked on it for nine years! I finished the first draft within two years, with half of it being written during the MA, and then rewrote and edited it before sending it off to agents in 2007 - 08. I had five agents request the whole novel and their replies were all similar in the fact that they loved it but weren't confident enough that it was going to make money, so they didn't take me on. That's when disappoint struck and I ended up putting the novel aside for a very long time. There have been lots of other things going on in this time too such as getting engaged and married, buying a house and doing it up, plus I’ve written another novel, so I've not been idle.
Once I dusted off the manuscript following the rejections from the agents I sent it out to four independent publishers and one of them also requested to read the whole novel and then suggested some major changes to make the book stronger. This rewrite was tedious and difficult because I ended up cutting flashback chapters, having to restructure the whole novel, write some completely new chapters and then somehow put it all back together again, which took time with rewrites on top of rewrites. That tedious process, however, was the most important one as it undoubtedly made the novel so much better.
Me: What's next for you as a writer?
Kate: Well, first I need to decide on what to do with my children’s novel, Time Shifters - whether to self-publish it or send it out to agents. I think a lot will depend on my experience of self-publishing The Butterfly Storm, so I'll see how the next few weeks go. I've started working on something new, another contemporary women's fiction novel, which will be the follow-up to The Butterfly Storm although it's in no way related. I'm very much at the planning stage of it at the moment but it has the working title of The House of Stone, a main character called Poppy Stone and it will predominately be set in Tanzania and Zanzibar.
Me: If you were to write another women's fiction novel, would you do anything differently?


Kate: Yes! I would think long and hard about the structure of the novel and the way I want to tell the story before starting to write it in the hope that the editing process would be easier than The Butterfly Storm.


Me: How has traveling impacted your writing?
Kate: Spending time in Greece was the catalyst for writing The Butterfly Storm. Even places in the UK have had an impact on my writing with north Norfolk on the east coast of England playing as big a role as Greece does. A visit to Warwick Castle sparked the idea for my children’s novel, Time Shifters, and our honeymoon to Tanzania and Zanzibar has influenced the setting for The House of Stone.  
Me: If a literary genie could grant you one wish for The Butterfly Storm, what would it be?


Kate: I’ve initially published The Butterfly Storm as an eBook but I aim to publish it as a paperback too. I’d love to be able to walk into a bookshop and pick up an actual copy of The Butterfly Storm. That really would be a dream come true. 

Note: You can purchase The Butterfly Storm ebook from amazon.com or amazon (UK)
Also, anyone who buys The Butterfly Storm between Friday 14th and Friday 28th June and emails the amazon receipt to kactus@kate-frost.co.uk will be put into a prize draw to win one of two £5/$5 amazon vouchers.

Tuesday, June 11, 2013

WIPpet Wednesday: "A Deadly Combination"

     Happy June 12! It's been a good week here with my JuNoWriMo project. I've hit a few roadblocks
and also a few huge milestones. I'm especially thankful for the people who prayed me through a real sluggish morning yesterday. I went on to have my most productive writing day so far!

     My new WIP still doesn't have a title, but here are twelve words from JuNoWriMo draft 1 in honor of the 12th of June.

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Poverty and beauty were a deadly combination for someone like his sister.

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     I'll tell you more about my WIP as it gets more solidified in the next few weeks. Maybe by the time it's finished I'll actually have a title for it!

     Happy WIPpet Wednesday, and be sure to check out My Random Muse to link up. And for you WIPpeters who also follow Kate Frost, check back here Monday to see her interview about The Butterfly Storm. Happy launch day, Kate!

Thursday, June 6, 2013

JuNoWriMo Update

     Today I decided to cut out a character who turned out to be superfluous. Maybe I'll give her a novel of her own one day. For now, out she goes.

     I also spent a huge chunk of time outside today and absolutely no time writing. I'm hoping to get an hour or two in tonight before bed.

Praises:

* The pace is still moving really fast. I still feel very encouraged and motivated. I've had a lot of fun doing word wars with other JuNoWriMo folks on Twitter.

* I've actually had more time with the kids, since I'm so protective of the time I spend away from my writing. When they're awake, I try to only spend half an hour or so behind my computer desk.

Prayer Requests:

* Continued momentum. So far, it's been great, but I always feel like I'm just one frustration away from having to fight the temptation to give up.

* Wisdom for the story to pull together well, both in terms of the plot and the characterization.

Wednesday, June 5, 2013

WIPpet Wednesday: "Kick Me Again"

     Just popping in to say hi. JuNoWriMo is going great. I really got into a groove last night, maybe
the biggest writer's high I've ever had. Story is chugging away, and I'm excited about where it's going!

     I'm being very protective of my non-writing time, so I won't be as social on Wednesdays as normal, but in honor of June 5, here are my first five sentences of JuNoWriMo draft 1 (it's a working title, don't worry). I guess it's kind of gross, not in a I'm-getting-eaten-by-a-vampire sort of way, but it at least gets a PG-13 for "thematic elements."

     Oh, and speaking of June 5, it's my anniversary! Nine years and counting!

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“Kick me again, and I swear I’ll kill you.” Mee-Kyong looked up in time to see Pang's boot as it snapped back her head. Thrown off balance, Mee-Kyong fell backwards, exposing the small swell of her abdomen.

Pang didn’t miss his opportunity.
 
As soon as his boot connected with the underside of her belly, Mee-Kyong felt a gush of liquid stream down her leg.

Monday, June 3, 2013

JuNoWriMo Update

     I'm almost ready to wrap up the opening section of my book. I've also decided that I'm not going to ascribe to the whole never-edit-as-you-go rule. So tomorrow I'll probably read through what I've done so far and add bits and pieces - a super quick touch up to make my life that much easier down the line.

Quick praises:
  • A lot more writing time than I expected. A whole bunch of adrenaline to dive right into this project.

Quick prayer requests:
  • Protection from discouragement and lethargy during my non-writing times.
  • Peaceful and positive marriage interactions.
  • Freedom from carpal tunnel complications.

Sunday, June 2, 2013

JuNoWriMo Update

Quick check in - We're 25 1/2 hours into JuNoWriMo (June Novel Writing Month). I'm just shy of the 5,000-word landmark. I felt a little timid and rusty at the beginning, but the pace is picking up. For the praying types out there, or those who just want to stay more personally up to date:

Praises:
  • Saturdays are especially busy since our family works all day at the local Saturday market, but I still got some time to write in and definitely feel more excited and less nervous than I was before I started.
Prayer Points:

  • More level emotions now that I'm actually writing and not just fretting over what I'll write.
  • Good balance between writing time and family time.