tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post9161246983799660704..comments2023-05-12T01:22:00.947-07:00Comments on Lightly Salted: WIPpet Wednesday: "You Can Go"Alana Terryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-60614467163890849822014-10-07T10:56:19.867-07:002014-10-07T10:56:19.867-07:00Umm that was supposed top say MAN, not ma'am.Umm that was supposed top say MAN, not ma'am. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-10832377264887073692014-10-07T10:55:41.464-07:002014-10-07T10:55:41.464-07:00Oooh... the pity. No ma'am wants to see that o...Oooh... the pity. No ma'am wants to see that on his woman's face. Compassion, yeah, okay, but pity? Ouch.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-89099350025098299342014-10-01T19:54:46.854-07:002014-10-01T19:54:46.854-07:00O, glad you love it! That's the first LOVE I&#...O, glad you love it! That's the first LOVE I've gotten!Alana Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-65289705169079858182014-09-27T11:39:02.842-07:002014-09-27T11:39:02.842-07:00I love the title, maybe because I frequently use t...I love the title, maybe because I frequently use that image as a theme in my own writing...matter of fact, I'm currently revising a scene of Chameleon's Dish (pending title change, possibly), that uses the threat of being torn asunder as its motivating force...<br /><br />Very intriguing snippet. I want to know what's going on here, and what comes next!Shan Jeniah Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01757607146774769663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-15653203953901933432014-09-25T16:47:48.004-07:002014-09-25T16:47:48.004-07:00Thanks for bringing up the genre point. It's a...Thanks for bringing up the genre point. It's a good one.Alana Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-53457451935766849152014-09-25T16:47:32.257-07:002014-09-25T16:47:32.257-07:00Thanks for stopping by Adrian. I always love your ...Thanks for stopping by Adrian. I always love your feedbackAlana Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-70287381513973849142014-09-25T16:47:14.462-07:002014-09-25T16:47:14.462-07:00Thanks so much!Thanks so much!Alana Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-4033768354444283532014-09-25T16:47:05.214-07:002014-09-25T16:47:05.214-07:00Hahaha, love your disclaimer. :)Hahaha, love your disclaimer. :)Alana Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-42865279326100549862014-09-25T16:46:47.036-07:002014-09-25T16:46:47.036-07:00Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate itThanks for the feedback! I appreciate itAlana Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-70706889651625901082014-09-25T05:26:30.059-07:002014-09-25T05:26:30.059-07:00Interesting how he's anxious for them not to h...Interesting how he's anxious for them not to hurt her, but then she's pitying him. Makes me wonder what he's thinking in response to her.<br /><br />I like the title, though if I were browsing books, I might wonder what genre it was. That's the difficulty with online sellers like Amazon. You can't really tell anything about a book when browsing because you have to click the link for a description.Amy Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17579508253374911018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-35851246933697960962014-09-24T15:05:13.530-07:002014-09-24T15:05:13.530-07:00I think it's interesting how Simon pitied her ...I think it's interesting how Simon pitied her and then it was turned back on him. Can't wait to read more about these characters and this world. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-80534577177478663342014-09-24T09:06:34.900-07:002014-09-24T09:06:34.900-07:00Great snippet - you certainly know how to keep us ...Great snippet - you certainly know how to keep us on the edge of our seats with all that tension. More, I tell you, I want more! :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-19463503332636370462014-09-24T05:21:37.241-07:002014-09-24T05:21:37.241-07:00But... but... ARRRGH.
You're killing me, Terr...But... but... ARRRGH.<br /><br />You're killing me, Terry. -_-<br /><br />I like the title, but it doesn't really grab me. It would be easy enough to remember if I'd read the blurb, but if I were just scrolling through new releases, I wouldn't get a sense of what it was about. With an eye-catching cover, though, it could work.<br /><br />(Said the author with vague, one-word titles, who admittedly hates coming up with titles and is bad at it. Ignore me. Seriously)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-48833927257925438452014-09-24T04:18:01.727-07:002014-09-24T04:18:01.727-07:00Another tense moment. Hmm...pity. I'm thinking...Another tense moment. Hmm...pity. I'm thinking that's not exactly what Simon wanted to see there.<br /><br />I like the title, BTW.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com