tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post5439576150479780912..comments2023-05-12T01:22:00.947-07:00Comments on Lightly Salted: Torn Asunder ExcerptsAlana Terryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-39406945925754422712014-10-07T10:59:20.029-07:002014-10-07T10:59:20.029-07:00... Shall I send Arvid over? She'd disagree ve...... Shall I send Arvid over? She'd disagree vehemently. Pffft. I disagree vehemently, and I DID have a husband at 19. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-7431153507011297482014-10-03T02:17:14.014-07:002014-10-03T02:17:14.014-07:00Great excerpt Alana. I liked the tension you portr...Great excerpt Alana. I liked the tension you portray - it was well drawn. It sounds like it's gonna be a really exciting read. :-)Elainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13198421580102655831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-58429298250760246582014-10-02T02:11:38.815-07:002014-10-02T02:11:38.815-07:00I save some, when I really like them. Once in a wh...I save some, when I really like them. Once in a while, I realize I'm writing a scene that belongs in another book, but I keep going, because I can't stop! Then, when it's time for revisions, I can move it. <br /><br />Other things I like, and might adapt, but just don't want to lose....<br /><br />I love this little bit. You always reveal so much in so few words. I really admire that! I especially like the idea of her sweating- even if I don't think it's all due to that fire at her back.Shan Jeniah Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01757607146774769663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-56304495764117542752014-10-02T02:07:21.910-07:002014-10-02T02:07:21.910-07:00Oh, could I do outtakes with Trip and T'Pol......Oh, could I do outtakes with Trip and T'Pol....hmmmmm!Shan Jeniah Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01757607146774769663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-37881174796091108232014-10-01T19:49:44.690-07:002014-10-01T19:49:44.690-07:00I often find it embarrassing to look over my delet...I often find it embarrassing to look over my deleted scenes. I hardly ever bring them out.Alana Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-6898719744327087282014-10-01T19:48:47.176-07:002014-10-01T19:48:47.176-07:00Yeah. It is a little young. Yeah. It is a little young. Alana Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-20622569181088796572014-10-01T19:48:07.719-07:002014-10-01T19:48:07.719-07:00Thanks. I always feel a little less futile if my c...Thanks. I always feel a little less futile if my cut scenes at least end up somewhere.Alana Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-9383239826137264402014-10-01T19:47:29.292-07:002014-10-01T19:47:29.292-07:00Thanks Amy. I wish I could get rid of mine. It mak...Thanks Amy. I wish I could get rid of mine. It makes my documents for very messyAlana Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-3469946225098532422014-10-01T19:46:58.673-07:002014-10-01T19:46:58.673-07:00He thinks. I feel less guilty about making cuts wh...He thinks. I feel less guilty about making cuts when I can at least share them with somebodyAlana Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-510343326114649132014-10-01T19:46:25.894-07:002014-10-01T19:46:25.894-07:00Yeah. It's not the one she wants. Hence the de...Yeah. It's not the one she wants. Hence the deleted scene.Alana Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-32376481312428453302014-10-01T19:46:00.002-07:002014-10-01T19:46:00.002-07:00I know, it's impossible to get rid of, isn'...I know, it's impossible to get rid of, isn't it?Alana Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-38549211605988916172014-10-01T19:45:38.217-07:002014-10-01T19:45:38.217-07:00haha, I like that idea a lot toohaha, I like that idea a lot tooAlana Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-14028175388170362452014-10-01T14:05:09.981-07:002014-10-01T14:05:09.981-07:00I collect most of my deleted scenes because often ...I collect most of my deleted scenes because often I re-work them and they wind up being used somewhere. Besides, it's fun to go back and look at what didn't make the cut, and why.<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-41636149738800450442014-10-01T14:03:49.985-07:002014-10-01T14:03:49.985-07:00I love that, Sarah! I think outtakes would be an a...I love that, Sarah! I think outtakes would be an awesome addition to a lot of books.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-26663414131646176552014-10-01T09:20:41.317-07:002014-10-01T09:20:41.317-07:00This made me snort...mostly because I was told the...This made me snort...mostly because I was told the same thing when I was 19. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-22273188413587362182014-10-01T07:29:24.504-07:002014-10-01T07:29:24.504-07:00I don't save mine either, but now that I see s...I don't save mine either, but now that I see some people posting theirs, I may have to start keeping some of mine. Nicely done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-65950365748308142032014-10-01T06:34:37.658-07:002014-10-01T06:34:37.658-07:00I am ashamed to admit I don't save my deleted ...I am ashamed to admit I don't save my deleted scenes. I take the "deleted" part literally, unless I think I can rewrite it for something else. I may have to rethink that! I like the snippet and how it reveals a bit about both characters.Amy Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17579508253374911018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-65515993632545730732014-10-01T02:40:37.901-07:002014-10-01T02:40:37.901-07:00Great snippet, I'm glad we got to read it, eve...Great snippet, I'm glad we got to read it, even if it is in a specially marked folder :-) Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-5363667859177165692014-10-01T02:38:20.287-07:002014-10-01T02:38:20.287-07:00Oh, dear, does he have one in mind? Oh, dear, does he have one in mind? Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-10807186509006123772014-09-30T23:37:07.703-07:002014-09-30T23:37:07.703-07:00Oooh!
I also have a deleted scenes folder of sor...Oooh! <br /><br />I also have a deleted scenes folder of sorts (more like years worth of stuff I haven't gotten rid of after it was removed from the manuscript). Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-5204805454937673182014-09-30T22:08:18.945-07:002014-09-30T22:08:18.945-07:00Oh! Do you have an outtakes scene folder as well? ...Oh! Do you have an outtakes scene folder as well? That would be fun to read! Maybe this very scene is in there. "Mr. Kim frowned but didn't say anything. Several seconds passed, then "Dangit. Author? I forgot my line. What is it again?" ;) hehehe<br /><br />Just saying. <br /><br />It would be cool to read...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08488269933801085746noreply@blogger.com