tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post4837049566406944957..comments2023-05-12T01:22:00.947-07:00Comments on Lightly Salted: WIPpet Wednesday: "Not Ashamed"Alana Terryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-8929071262271919822014-06-29T05:41:35.684-07:002014-06-29T05:41:35.684-07:00I understand that wrist pain all too well. *sigh* ...I understand that wrist pain all too well. *sigh* Excellent excerpt. You've expertly crafted a great look into Mr. Tong with just a few sentences.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-36261612432951069142014-06-29T01:38:30.755-07:002014-06-29T01:38:30.755-07:00Agh, what a gorgeous excerpt! I think he's a f...Agh, what a gorgeous excerpt! I think he's a favourite already!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-25516907111086525162014-06-27T16:02:55.905-07:002014-06-27T16:02:55.905-07:00For a minor character, Mr. Tong packs a lot of sto...For a minor character, Mr. Tong packs a lot of story into his few words of introduction. Nice excerpt, Alana.Eden "Kymele" Mabeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01550337993392791643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-8248146691496546032014-06-26T16:22:20.021-07:002014-06-26T16:22:20.021-07:00Not to self: Do not read Alana's posts while l...Not to self: Do not read Alana's posts while listening to upbeat music. I think I'm going to come back and read it again later, because I can tell it's poignant and beautiful, but I'm not getting the full impact. Even so, I like Mr. Tong already. =0) Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-25325968352785711342014-06-26T05:56:22.007-07:002014-06-26T05:56:22.007-07:00Thanks so much, Elaine!Thanks so much, Elaine!Alana Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-79781172214789871912014-06-26T05:56:07.501-07:002014-06-26T05:56:07.501-07:00Thanks so much, Shan. I sometimes wish I could tal...Thanks so much, Shan. I sometimes wish I could talk to my characters like that too. :) He definitely deserves some peace.Alana Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-78819726437951572872014-06-26T05:39:50.887-07:002014-06-26T05:39:50.887-07:00This is poignant Alana. I love how you've con...This is poignant Alana. I love how you've conveyed so much about Mr Tong's character in just a few short sentences. I'm hoping very much that he survives. Elainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13198421580102655831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-55656763604664681632014-06-25T22:34:02.870-07:002014-06-25T22:34:02.870-07:00So much in so few words. I am right there with Mr...So much in so few words. I am right there with Mr. Tong, wanting to know much more about his long story, wanting to tell him he's doing fine. I'll be waiting to see what's next for him - peace, I hope. Shan Jeniah Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01757607146774769663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-79635802511683148982014-06-25T20:00:02.665-07:002014-06-25T20:00:02.665-07:00Thank you so much! Thank you so much! Alana Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-62152603616053388312014-06-25T19:59:49.029-07:002014-06-25T19:59:49.029-07:00Thanks, Adrian. Mr. Tong is definitely a minor cha...Thanks, Adrian. Mr. Tong is definitely a minor character, but I like him a lotAlana Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785787382382893857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-46418161194594358852014-06-25T13:45:53.569-07:002014-06-25T13:45:53.569-07:00Nice snippet, raises a lot of questions in the rea...Nice snippet, raises a lot of questions in the reader's mind. I like Tong's thoughts about how things could go. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-89072872509539229752014-06-25T06:03:18.893-07:002014-06-25T06:03:18.893-07:00This is a great excerpt. It shows something about ...This is a great excerpt. It shows something about Mr. Tong, something about the way he thinks and about his character. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9155927823601605573.post-19996380806971780672014-06-25T05:31:54.389-07:002014-06-25T05:31:54.389-07:00Ooooh I like this excerpt! Very well written! Ooooh I like this excerpt! Very well written! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com